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Re: SITY: chapter two
Previous chapter: NOTE: This time, it's Derek's POV. Learn the rules. And then break them. We found the kid sitting on his bed, eyes closed and looking extremely peaceful considering ...
Sep 29, 2008 -
Re: Anna
The woman paced on the street corner, her high heels clacking against the hard pavement. The sky was clear, and the star shined their faces down on the people. Night ...
Sep 27, 2008 -
Re: SITY: Sanchez's Intstitute for Troubled Youth
hey guys, thanks for the reviews. They're very much appreciated. thatannagirl, I went back and changed the things you mentioned. The scrapping thing, I was meant to say scraping. ^__^ ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: SITY: Sanchez's Intstitute for Troubled Youth
Drugs R Us Four years. That’s how long they tell me it’s been. Four freaking years. You think it’d be easier as time moves on. Well, it was. For a ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: A Higher Race part 2
Water flowed constantly, disappearing into a mesh grill set into one end, to be filtered, cleansed heated and lightly scented before making its way to the opposite end, where a ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: Endless Possibilities
When he stopped, he said, “They’ve been in here before. One of ‘em made a pass at a waitress.” “We don’t have any waitresses,” Dan said. Connor cocked an eyebrow. ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: With You
I stayed with you. After all we’d been though together; after all of our time apart, I held you in my arms at the end. In those last moments, the ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: A Higher Race
“It is an honour, sir. He is right through here.” I'm assuming she's speaking proper because of who he is, but saying "He is" and "It is" sounds weird to ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: My story.
dude.. that actually made me really sad.. and angry
Sep 19, 2008 -
Re: Barricade
I really really liked this. You captured Mello really well, or i think you did anyway. I like how you described him. And Matt. Matt was awesome. Your style helped ...
Sep 17, 2008 -
Re: hey hey
well, hi everyone! i really didn't expect such a nice welcome. Everybody asked so many questions! Well, i live to write fanfiction, though i do quite a bit of original ...
Jul 29, 2008 -
Re: Vampires before midnight.
The fires roared. The only other thing that could be heard was screams of fear that rang in the air. Then all of a sudden, silence. I am the last ...
Jul 27, 2008 -
Re: Vampires before midnight.
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Jul 25, 2008 -
Re: Crawling
I thought it was good, but you know that already. umm... feedback is probably the same as in class.. the whole Trigger thing and all that. But another thing, and ...
Jul 25, 2008 -
Re: Sleeping in Silence
Authors note: Originally posted on Fanfiction.net, my home. death note fanfiction. Because i get bored at home. And because i felt like it. It's kinda sad... but i hope i ...
Jun 8, 2008
